tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8066327968195010422.post6505926499315981070..comments2012-02-14T12:49:55.184-08:00Comments on BA Hons CG Arts & Animation: La Bell et la Bete reveiw and sketches of the weekendAmi Whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02000235883361674688noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8066327968195010422.post-57959332128051311142011-09-28T15:42:50.809-07:002011-09-28T15:42:50.809-07:00Hey Ami,
Okay - well it's obvious that you...Hey Ami,<br /><br />Okay - well it's obvious that you've stepped up in terms of your role as 'reviewer', and your latest review is beginning to improve in terms of structure and presentation - for instance, the captioning of the illustrations. That said, you're still missing a few of the necessary ingredients that will further help you construct credible, evidence-based reviews - for example, use of quotes and bibliography etc. I suggest too that you write your reviews as a word doc first, and make use of the spelling and grammar check, as your spelling is noticeably poor. Now, this may be because spelling etc. is something with which you've always experienced difficult, so I'd like to suggest that you seek a little extra support. I'm going to suggest you make an appointment with Gaby Jones, who works with lots of students to improve their written work and study skills. Email me at pgomm@ucreative.ac.uk if you're interested in meeting which Gaby, and I'll get sometime sorted out. :Dtutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com